My first Threadless Submission

Ok, so after a year of spending several hours per week on the threadless.com website I finally got the bizalls to submit my own design. It's my first, and there is plenty of room for improvement, but I figured I better just do it!

So please check out my design and give it a score...constructive critques are encouraged too. And also browse the rest of the site, there are some amazing illustrations out there. It's like visiting an art gallery.

My design: